April 2011
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His love is still in me, like a broken arrow.
Chapter 12
Sorry if this chapter is boring, it’s been quite a long time since I’ve updated. :(
The next morning, I woke up to the sound of thunder and rain. It feels like I’m back in Canada again, except this time I have Marc right by my side. “Good morning hermosa” Marc whispered into my ear as he wrapped an arm around me and pulled me closer to him. “Hola!...
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Hi everyone!
I’m EXTREMELY sorry for not updating for 2 months :( I was really busy with my midterms, but I can’t relax just yet since my finals are right around the corner. I have some free time so I will try my best to update everyday or every other day.
February 2011
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unacorazonada asked: I absolutely LOVED the last part<33 I had a smile on my face the whole time:).. Hoping you update today!! Oh and Thank you for sharing your story with us:)
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Chapter 11
I woke up the next morning next to Marc, who was asleep on his bare stomach with his face facing away from mine. Scooting closer to him, I kissed the spot between his shoulder blades, which caused him to shiver. He turned his head slowly around to look at me, eyes squinting from the bright light exploding through the windows. “Good morning sunshine.” I smiled, running my...
Anonymous asked: this fic changed my life!!!1!! please update soonish :D :D :D
Anonymous asked: This fic is like the best Marc Bartra fic EVER!
plz update soon
plz update soon
mes-que-un-sport asked: update soon? :)
Anonymous asked: update again soon please!!! :)
mes-que-un-sport asked: yess thank you for making that chapter the way you did.. it's about time <333
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Hey everyone!
Can you go read Chapter 10 again? Yesterday I typed out a LONG chapter and tumblr decided to post only a quarter of it -.-
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Chapter 10-
Francesca’s POV I rushed through my apartment and grabbed every clothing item in sight, then stuffing them into a medium sized maroon suitcase. “Damn it!” I cursed as I tried to close the bag. What did I put in there? My hands searched for anything unnecessary and threw them out onto the bed behind me, not even looking twice at what I threw out. For all I knew, I...
Update in a few minutes :D
January 2011
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dayumflint asked: This story is so AMAZING! :D
I can't wait until the next chapter:) I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE:3
I can't wait until the next chapter:) I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE:3
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If you guys see any spelling mistakes (with the...
It’s just TextEdit trying to be smart. :p
]]>lenabartra replied to your post: His love is still in me, like a broken arrow.
i friggin love you right now!!!
hahaha thank you! <33 :*
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Chapter 9 “Hola chica, I knew you’d be awake.” Sergi said, his voice sounded a bit sad and concerned. “I miss you…we all miss you.” “I miss you too! How is he?” I asked, hoping Sergi would realize that I was talking about Marc. He sighed, and I knew immediately that Marc was still upset. Why wouldn’t he? I cheated on him with that son of a bitch who...
Anonymous asked: hey... sorry to be a bother... but when are you posting it!!!! I was looking forward to it.
btw I love your stories!
btw I love your stories!
Anonymous asked: update soon plz? :) hope you're doing well!
-deulofeu asked: I swear you write the best fanfic I've ever read
it's so real
and being about Marc Bartra helps ;)
don't stop! ever!
it's so real
and being about Marc Bartra helps ;)
don't stop! ever!
Anonymous asked: aha thank you! i like yours too!
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unacorazonada asked: Thank youuuuu:) thank you so much for updating!!
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Chapter 8- -Francesca’s POV- I woke up next morning to the sound of thunder and rain. Yet another gloomy day, what a surprise. Somehow, the weather outside seemed to match my mood…weird, isn’t it? Even though I was happy to see Damon again, I wished that I had stayed in Barcelona with Marc in stead of cheat on him with that bastard. After hours of tossing and turning in my bed,...
mes-que-un-sport asked: update this weekend plz? :) you can't just leave them mad at each other!! haha so not fair!
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Ipromisethestorywillgetbetter :D
Anonymous asked: ahh come on dude it's almost 1am in the UK.. you done yet? :((
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Chapter 7 I got off the plane finally, after crying for hours in Gerard Pique’s comforting arms. He told me he knew how hard it was to leave someone you love so much behind. At the airport, we said our goodbyes, and after a split second, he disappeared into the crowd of screaming fans and paparazzi. No one came to greet me, as usual. So I took the taxi back to the apartment. I turned my...
Anonymous asked: i was gonna ask you to plz update but i see someone already did! so please & thank you hun! :)
Anonymous asked: are you still going to be writing more parts? I think you should because this is a great story!!!
Anonymous asked: thanks for the update! really appreciate it :) and haha nice touch adding pique at the end (well we all know it's him anyway) :P
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Chapter 6 - Part 2
The sun was shining and the sky was clear again - cloudless. I got off the bed, leaving Marc still asleep on his stomach. Somehow, his head was at the end of the bed while his feet were on the pillow. I made my way to the bathroom to change back into the dress and brush my teeth, hoping to look presentable. “Francesca?” Marc’s voice came from the bedroom....
Anonymous asked: was looking forward to the update that was promised! plz let it be this weekend!
December 2010
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Anonymous asked: ahhh i can't take it i need to know what happens! update soon please! :)
Anonymous asked: hey i just read through your fanfic and at first i didn't think i'd like it (no offence but i have a pretty good imagination so i'm picky with other peoples' stories) but i actually found it really cute and a few moments you really surprised me! can't wait for the rest :)
Anonymous asked: WHAT?! girl, you cannot just end it like that! its making me crazyyy!!!!
but i love it regardless!
but i love it regardless!
ohmygodiola-deactivated20121116 asked: I loveeeeee this story. You keep me wanting more. Great job, and hope you update soon! :)
unacorazonada asked: Pleasee continue it asap.. I'm addicted to this fic<33 I love Those two they are so adorable(:
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Chapter 6 - Part 1 We lay there, him half naked & me in his shirt that went down to just below my butt. My thighs were exposed, luckily I had shaved before hand and drowned my legs in lotion. Marc faced the ceiling, while I faced the window, giving him my back. A few hours later - or what seemed like it - I felt a pair of hands run up my sides, sending shivers up and down my body. He held me...
Anonymous asked: OMG i love it! you HAVE to post more ASAP if you want me to keep what little sanity i have left!!!!
<3
<3
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Chapter 5 -
-Marc’s POV- I knew exactly where I would be taking Francesca out to dinner; a picnic by the beach in Sitges. It was a quiet town at most times, so it’s perfect for a date. Sergi came by, dressed in football shorts and a shirt, as we were off to play football with a few friends. “So, how was the match?” He asked, taking a bite of the sandwich he made....
Anonymous asked: is it just me,or WCSF stopped posting??btw Ilove your fanfic keep writing!!!;P
ohmygodiola-deactivated20121116 asked: Wow, I just read the whole fiction and I'm in love with it!
you have got to update soon, it's excellent.
and I love Marc as well!
:]
you have got to update soon, it's excellent.
and I love Marc as well!
:]
Anonymous asked: I love Broken Arrow so much! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
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Chapter 4 -
“Isn’t this exactly how the couple died at the beginning of the movie Jaws?” I asked as he lead me into the warm salty water. He held my hand, and interlaced his fingers with mine. Butterflies fluttered inside my stomach everytime he looked back and smiled at me, reassuring me that everything was going to be alright and that we wouldn’t get eaten....
November 2010
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Chapter 3 Last night’s dream was playing in my head again, it felt so real, & I just couldn’t get over it. Every time I saw Marc today I walked the other way (a bit obviously if I may add), feeling totally embarrassed by what my unconscious mind was thinking of doing last night. We sat down for dinner that night - after Cristina & I had covered another quarter of Barcelona -...
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Hi everyone!
My story is now up on World Cup Sexual Frustration. They think my story is about Jesus Navas :p
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Play With Fire Pt.2
I’m staring through the window and the plane feels like its still… not moving.. weird feeling. I notice the sun is just rising and rays of orange and yellow streak through the clouds…it’s breathtaking!
Wait, its already morning! I must have slept for more than 7 hours straight… it’s been so long since I had slept for more than 3 hours a night. I take a deep breath, enjoy the fact that I had...
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Chapter 2-
“I’m Marc Bartra, I’m one of Cristina’s brothers, the other one is there…that’s my twin brother Eric” The beautiful man in front of me said as he pointed to his twin brother who was flirting with some girls. Oh good god, there’s two of them. Of course nothing he said went in…I was too busy watching his perfectly structured face as he spoke. We...
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